All Comments on 'My Devious Daughter Pt. 01'

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KingKong2020KingKong202012 months ago

What happened next , can't wait to read future chapters in the series

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

"A few minutes later she came down, completely naked carrying her cloths. "

What is the difference between 'cloths' and 'clothes'?

Also, to 'Anonymous' an hour ago - you must mean 'typos' NOT 'Typeos'!

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

Despite the errors this is exactly what literotica.com is expected to publish.

Reading this makes it easy to skip over the spelling and typos.

Wonderful length . . . Story, that is.

Grogu269Grogu26912 months ago

The content was hot as hell, loved the incest.

rainsolrainsol5 months ago

very hot story...love incest

Incestlove54Incestlove54about 2 months ago

Very nice first chapter.

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I’m a straight mature female who loves to write stories, mostly fiction but some true, and some from my own inner thoughts. I love to write masturbation, incest, and exhibition stories the best I believe most females my age feel the same, they just won’t admit it, but I do!

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