All Comments on 'My Girlfriend's Arch Rival Pt. 01'

This is a really fun story, but it just needed to be proofread

Julia is the author and the main character. Jake would do almost anything to stop her threating his girlfriend. I can see him being turned into the oral slave Julia would make him, and he services his girlfriend. Just do not make him the school’s fuck toy.

Honestly, him just being thrown around like that really pisses me off, if it had something else, maybe someone helping her, or her being trained in something, then ya, sure, but just pure strength? No, it's dumb.