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"Oh god." Jasmine started convulsing beneath me. Her ass clenched around my cock Her powerful legs kicked, sending one bottle of yogurt smashing into the wall. Her breath came out in short hisses and her face contorted with pleasure. Soon enough she slapped my wrist away from her clit. Soon afterwards, her huge cock sent a long stream of white liquid into the air. It flew in a wide arc above her head and stuck to the refrigerator door. Another spurt of sperm followed, then another and another.
Jasmine screamed something unintelligible and sent the last stream way up into the kitchen chandelier.
She lay beneath me panting hard and I waited for her, my cock buried in the heaven of her ass.
It took her a minute or so to gain her breath back. She smiled at me with those penetrating green eyes of her. "Two orgasms, one after the other. Your turn, baby."
I started pounding her again.
"Slower, sweetie, you want this to last."
I took a deep breath. "You're the first woman who ever told me to go slow after she came."
She reached out and caressed my face. "How does it feel inside me?"
I closed my eyes and moaned.
"That's all I need to know. Fuck me, babe, pound me, drill me."
I didn't need encouragement. I drilled her beautiful ass for more than twenty minutes. A record for me. Each time I was on the verge of shooting Jasmine pushed me off her and waited until I regained my composure. It was a slow torture, it was heavenly. By the third time she pulled me out, her cock was stiff again.
I lay panting beside her, waiting to cool down before I'll enter her again. She caressed my chest and nibbled my neck.
"You came. I didn't even touch your penis." I said between intakes of air.
"I have a prostate, just like you, dummy."
A minute later I was in her again, thrusting hard. This time my hand was on her massive cock, masturbating it to the tempo of my penetrations.
Jasmine moaned and writhed beneath me. Her brow knitted in concentration and soon enough she started shooting a second time. She gave a short scream, grabbed my buttocks and rammed me hard inside her.
It was just too much for me. Waves of electricity flew through my body and fireworks exploded in my head. I thrust faster inside her ass. My balls tightened and pulled up into my body.
I shot once.
The table at that moment decided it had had enough. One of its metal legs folded beneath it and it tilted to the side until it hit the wall. Then the remaining legs folded and we landed with a loud crash on the black and white chessboard decorated tiles.
I rose up immediately. Jasmine was still on her back, moaning.
"Are you ok?" I shouted. "Jasmine, are you ok?"
She opened one eye and looked around.
"Anything broken?" I went down between the debris of our once glorious breakfast and started checking her body.
Jasmine stared amazed at her kitchen that just an hour ago could have decorated the front page of any foppish high-class home magazine. She looked at the puddles of yogurt, the squashed tomatoes, the olive oil stains, the smears of white goat cheese, the ruined mushrooms and the broken dishes.
A heavy drop of sperm fell down from the chandelier onto her stomach. Jasmine grabbed my wrist and pulled me onto her for a long loving kiss. She let go and stared into my eyes "What's for lunch?"
- COMMENTS
Anonymousabout 8 years agoI hope you keep writing stories like this. I live herms and nerds!
Anonymousalmost 9 years agoThis is one of the best hermapradite stories on this site. I'm extremely happy to have found it. the development between the characters are exquisite. This story is so vivid in its descriptions, i simply love it.
Trueskyabout 13 years agoYour story is very interesting I wish I knew a tswoman or woman like this. Though she's very hot she's also the biggest bitch I have ever heard of not to mention the biggest sex addict. I honestly don't no if I could take all that sex since thats really tiring but it seems quite awesome. Your writing is alright I have no complaints for the most part.
knightofheartsover 13 years agoI have to agree with the others here, your female lead could have gotten the same results if she had just seduced the male lead. However, while certainly she was rather a irritating lead character in the beginning I don't think you'll have that much trouble making her likable. Lets face it romance novels and their progeny have been doing the same thing for decades. While I can't say I would have gone the same route I can't complain about your technique which is excellent.
Scotsdudeover 13 years agoRead the sex scene again (the end one) and at the same time, listen to the new Tron: Legacy trailer music by Daft Punk and then tell me they don't go together! Fantastic.
Metamorphoseover 13 years agoAuthorChapter five is in the making. I’m having some editing problems issues. It kinds of stretches too much and has too little steam.
If anyone volunteers to give it a quick read and offer some suggestions, I’ll be more than glad to share ideas.
Concerning the – love angle issue and Jasmine charismatic character and morality – I’ve noticed few of you have raised. How am I going to make her sympathetic and Ian forget all she’s made him go through.
Well, I gave that one a deep thought (fifteen seconds) and I can assure you that I don’t have a clue. I never meant for them to be lovers, I was just reaching for a more rounded character. Like someone here said, torture and rape can be fun for a chapter or two, after that it gets old. An interesting idea, though.
Oh, there is one point that keeps annoying me. People complain that Ian suffers from a serious case of Jellyfish backbone. Why isn’t he taking a kitchen knife and makes the world a little better?
When have you ever heard of an abuse and rape victim ever doing that? Most of them keep quiet for years, sometimes forever. Out of all the ludicrous, impossible details in the story, why choose to pick on something that is actually believable?
And just to ease the mind of one anonymous puzzled guy. Yes, it is based on a true story, I just changed the names.
Cheers
List_of_Romanticsover 13 years agoPros: You're a very fine writer; you've got a great wit and mind for writing humorous dialogue (especially as it pertains to your male lead's dialogue); you're male lead is very well written (if not always believable in his reactions to events; Stockholm Syndrome?) and quite sympathetic.
Cons: But... I gotta agree also with some other commentators that your female lead, while sexy, is a truly horrid and unsympathetic sexual predator (unless the reader is a sub and or sissy) who's behavior (despite your attempts to soften her up with back story) is completely reprehensible, vile, and without defense (if you want to turn this towards the romantic). Again, the subs and the sissies will dig her (because they want a girl just like her to Dom them), but the reader looking for a good story (over just a quick wank) likely won't.
I'm also wondering how you're going to reconcile her deplorable treatment of the male lead (e.g. rape, torture, blackmail, prostitution, etc. etc.) as these aren't the foundations of any plausible loving relationship (even in fiction). I'm fairly confident Hallmark doesn't make a card for *this* particular problem -"Sorry I anal and orally raped, tortured and abused you for days on end, but I'm hoping we can be BFF's." Yeah, not so much.
Anonymousover 13 years agoDear Metamorphose.....
I'm really looking forward to the next chapter in this mighty tale, and the next, and the next, and as you can tell, I really love your story, and hope you will write many more chapters to this epic tale.....
and also many many thank for the ones you already have posted, I just love this tale, the best ever.....
with regards
Michael
Anonymousover 13 years agoLet me pose this question (as I see you shooting for the love angle): How do you plan to soften this unsympathetic Devil? Her past may have been shitty, but it doesn't excuse her reprehensible torment.
For the last four chapters she's done nothing but belittle/demean, extort, rape, coerce, imprison, abuse, and torture (physically and mentally) this poor bastard (who by all logic should have reported her to the cops and sued her ass into the ground back around chapter 1 for sexual harassment, as any normal person would have), so how does she or can she realistically redeem herself to her victim?
Because, at some point in the future, that black chunk of wasteland ice said psycho calls a heart is going to thaw, in sets the remorse and the guilty conscience (assuming she even has one)... How can she make it (believably) right?
And don't say by the power of -Stockholm Syndrome- love and or sex. (hello, weak sauce) Nothing excuses her actions and realistically I can't see how he'd forgive her once she no longer has him under her thumb.
Frankly, I'm kinda surprised he hasn't gotten his bloody revenge against his captor and tormentor (which would be the normal response for the avg. male, non-S&M, non-humiliation, non-sissy). No jury would convict.
All that said, I am curious to see how you handle this next chapter.
