by Thors_Fist
If you haven't figured this out already, this is a repeat of My Husband Fucked Me Over, no chapter heading. That was supposed to be Chapter 7 and I asked that it get changed, but it never was. The wouldn't publish chapter 8 without a Chapter 7, so I had to resubmit that one again. Chapter 8 next, and soon. Thors_Fist.
Thought I'd read the first bit so glad I looked. No idea what I wrote last time so here goes.
Great instalment, like how Sam is helping Becky and also Bonnie patch up her marriage. 5 from me.
I enjoyed rereading this as I had read it first on on Lush. It’s still a 5 star chapter. Thank You!!!
My mistake on it being on Lush as I remembered reading the story. Thanks for the explanation. Now it’s on to part 8
DEAR AUTHOR, not familiar with lengthy previous chapters, but ! I enjoy your writing as always. Came across as a SEXY SOAP OPERA ! Fun, too ! Again, congrats to you and the DEAR EDITORS. - written with no long paragraphs. Dialogue seemed REAL. 5 STARS !
I am really enjoying this series. Not sure if you're looking for notes so apologies if not. I found these 2 passages that I believe you were referring to Robert but wrote Bill.
"I blew Ben a kiss and taking Bill's and Pen's hands, led them down to join the others, who were currently on the back deck."
"Bill and his first wife were quite experimental, trying a lot of different things, reading about them before trying them. When Bill and I got married, we tried the things that he and his first wife had enjoyed, and I enjoyed them too. We kept doing them."
You flipped Bill and Robert again. You did that in the previous chapter . Also, please leave politics out of your wonderful story. Totally unnecessary .
Love this story until you got political. It was no use to the story and was uncalled for.