All Comments on 'My Ideal 18th Physical Checkup'

Very unusual,in a fun way.

Top tier shit. Great work, you have a clear tone that you were going for and you nailed it. I only wish there was more boob play, but I appreciate that you were focused on the lips specifically and all the rest was window-dressing to enhance them.

Again, great work. Genuinely very good writing.

I hope you are writing more. I sure would love to read more.

Bro i just wanted to jack off not re examine my life and what it takes to become mature.