All Comments on 'My Little Sister’s Visit Ch. 10'

Curseeeeeeed !

... and then what happened?

great story so far, when do we see the next few chapters

Since when did Megan become shy? She blushed in the restaurant when she realized everyone could see her bare groin. Then again when the dealer walked in after she had sex with Barry. As far as I can recall she has not blushed at any point or been shy at all. It kind of sticks out.

Also when they get to the restaurant, the writer refers to Megan as Jean. When he first gets the wine, and they didn't ask 'jean' for an ID.

Just opinions. No real complaints this chapter

Buddy J.

P.S okay one small thing. At the beginning of this section. It says after Megan let slip she was his sister to Paul. Steve (the point of view) wouldn't know about that part yet. Kind of nit picking there.