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AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Okay it only took 11 chapters, but we finally got to the non-consent / reluctance material. I'm not sure if I liked the drug fueled haze part or not, but it was pretty well written.

Also I'm pretty sure Steve mentioned earlier in the series, he had never thought about his sister in a sexual way. This chapter he mentions that he has had wet dreams about her. I think that information at the beginning would have made it better. It would be a clearer reason why he was less reluctant when she sucked him off that first morning. Also why he would have been okay (Okayish) with them doing sexual things together.

Just my opinion,

Buddy J.

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