by Asperger27
This is just horrible. So many grammar, spelling and past/present tense errors that it’s impossible to keep track of what’s going on. 1.
Loser with 4 inch penis contest with stud?seriously? Can you write something new for once?
This is dumb. It's so obvious what happened, yet the kid doesn't get it? I'm out!
Mom was Jennifer in the last chapter, Jessica in this one. Love the story overall, but gotta work on the consistency.
Yeah I realized I did that. Meant to have her name in the first chapter as Jessica, but stupid typos...ugh. So yes her name is Jessica.