by ExploreAll
You stated the story withJake coming over for release and then you had a flashback to Andrew and never finished the original premise of this story...
The story would be great if not for the threesome. Sorry, you built nice romance one-on-one, which is rare on Literotica, and you spoiled it with adding third person. Weird and unnecessary. 3 stars from me, would be five if not for the extra guy.