All Comments on 'My New Life Ch. 18'

by Cumister

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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
My 2 cents

Another great chapter. Love the characters and the direction this story is going. Looking forward to reading more. Thanks for your time and imagination.

far_wanderer1984far_wanderer1984about 4 years ago

Another fun read, came across this while story hoping and happy I've read it. Keep the chapters coming.

UltimateHomeBodyUltimateHomeBodyabout 4 years ago

Enjoyable, fun and nice story.

Please proof read to pick little errors that pop up. Eg throes not throws of passion.

Also you use the wrong word a lot and gets to the annoying stage. Google using lie or lay. You lay eggs, not on the bed.

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7/30/20: Chapter 20 submitted. Sorry for the delay. Several things going on. I will probably be a bit before the next chapter but plan on speeding up the timeline some. Covered the entire month of October in this one with probably cover two in the next. Stay safe, wear you mas...

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