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by flashgordon562006
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ndeavourover 4 years agoKeep up the good work
You have a good thing going- lots of possibilities - so keep the chapters coming
Anonymousover 4 years agoEditor?
I don't know if you have an editor or not but there is a lot of confusing voice changes in mid sentence etc. If nothing else, have someone read it aloud to you before you post it. That will probably catch most of the issues.
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