by JQueen9
Enjoyed the first chapter and looking forward to more, just wondering why the setup had to include a girlfriend he’s cheating on. Maybe they’re not exclusive, but either way that detail seemed unecessary.
I've finished the first three parts of this story, then came back to re-read chapter one. Wow. This is a great story so far. It is building nicely. This author regularly crafts fiction that grows and evolves in unexpected ways that are erotic and adventurous at the same time. Can't wait for the rest of the series.
Pretty cool, only problem is that most 2 person tents are only comfortable for 1 person, other than that the story was awesome!
Hmmmm....I wonder if he will with Rita in the end? Good start, can't wait to read more.