All Comments on 'My Secret Slutty Self'

Congrats on your first story but please proofread your stories, senseless mistakes throughout. Good luck.

Great job!

I don't know if you are male or female (presumably female), but your prep-work for sex is something all women should imitate. Also, your detailed description of the 'acts' was easy to follow - something that some writers get lost in. I'd say you've 'been there - done that'.

It was hot, it was realistic and for a supposed first story - you're already a pro.

By chance... Is that room still available? If not, a pillow on your floor will be fine...

That was fun. You have a wicked imagination and it's a sexy read. Wouldn't it be fun to read about her encounters with some of her other lodgers

Awesome!! keep writing !!!

The heat of your pussy comes sizzling off the page. In love with your gash, slit, cunt, fuck hole depictions. Love a landing strip over a hard fuck button. Lusty big lippy big hard clitty pussy. Beautiful fuck writing. Love that your strenth as a woman comes shinning through (five stars). Will reread this for sure.

Looking forward to reading more of your memories or fantasies.

Very enjoyable, thank you!