All Comments on 'My Sister Makes Porn, So What Ch. 11'

by LauraRiceErotica

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Marvin2017Marvin20179 months ago

How did the “Sponsor” figure out where they lived? Was he someone in power that could

access such information -or- long lost Uncle Fred, who knew the family and put two and two

together?

This is getting exciting even without the sex…sort of, action then more action! 5 ⭐️

245624569 months ago

Keep the chapters rolling. Loved it.

Marvin2017Marvin20179 months ago

Duhh…sponsor set up the condo, that’s how he knows

Still think Uncle Fred is in play 😃

SomeDamnedDudeSomeDamnedDude9 months ago

As to how the sponsor knew where the new apartment was, simple, the expensive car that Kelly still had probably had some form of tracking on it. Then just watch the area around it to see which building she enters, conversely he probably had a PI do that legwork as he obviously has plenty of disposable income.

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Nicely done, now for repairing the door and changing the locks .

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

5 stars

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Looking forward to the next chapter!

KnightofmindKnightofmind9 months ago

Wow! That was crazy. What an incredibly visceral chapter! I withdraw my comment about description regarding your characters as well. This isn't just a fixed narrative but a series of erotic fantasies. One in which we are meant to project ourselves. My apologies! Great work!

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