All Comments on 'My Slut and a BDSM Party Ch. 01'

I started to read this, but soon was overwhelmed with the amount of run on sentences and improper grammar. *Hint* Please learn the proper use of an 's to show possession. I don't mean to be rude, just disappointed.

Yes you're right grammer has never been my strong suit struggling to find a good editor thank you for the feedback

Really Enjoyed the Interaction Between slut and ALL the other sluts! Fun and Enjoyable! Keep Writing!

Your male character comes across as a massive arsehole, crass, vulgar, trying for a shock factor and failing miserably, I honestly didn’t think it was possible to over use the word ‘slut’ in a story but you did it. Do you even know what BDSM actually is? I enjoy BDSM and I enjoy BDSM stories but for me yours fell flat.

Most reputable clubs and Dom’s would have issues with someone using and degrading somebody else’s sub without asking permission.

“I elected not to wear briefs to show off my most prized possession” .....seriously?? Any Dom with half a clue would count their sub(s) as their most prized possession. I couldn’t take any of it seriously after that.

Tess (UK)