by Massman669
"This got us really excited and we rutted like a****ls until I told Suzie that I was cumming."
Please explain to me why you censored ANYTHING at all in your story, much less the word 'animals'. What purpose in the name of common sense does that serve? I'm done here. 1/5
I knew as soon as roger popped up out of nowhere he was going to fuck the sister, just a complete failure.1/5
This series is very good BUT...
Beside the senseless censoring of some words, you make many typos and mistakes (seaman!) that distract the reader. Some say that we should disregard such errors, but this is supposed to be literature which implies a high quality of language. Do yourself a favor and proofread your texts or get the help of a good editor.