All Comments on 'My Summer of Fun'

I kept waiting for the hammer to fall. Neither of the leading characters were at all attractive - I feel sorry for Ken. It may be very realistic portraying the way some people treat others

Pretty hot fucking story

Your sentences read like they were individually written instead of being one solid story. Cold, no emotions. But if all you were going for is a stroke story then you succeeded for most readers. Good luck.

This has all the elements to be a great romance story, but the cheating element is a big drawback.