by Anal Slave
You missed a few minor details like. No one bothered to take the cock cage off. And you can't just walk in a motel room. Otherwise not bad. First try writing?
He’s a drug dealer in a small town who got married at 18? How the fuck did he support his family? Selling drugs in a small town? Like fuck he did! He would have been in goddamn prison on his 18th birthday.
Sissy wimp loser.Wife will dump his pathetic ass and find a real man. What a joke!
Great start to what I hope will be a series of stories. I would love to have 2 women rim my asshole for an hour and then they would fuck me deep & hard with their strap-ons. I hope in one of the next chapters that Beth's boyfriend shows up and feeds his cock to hubby.