by LolaBKnox
I enjoyed the first chapter with the rain. The surprise at work was good, too. You lost me upon arriving home and the punishment. It seemed mean and ugly to me, not sexy. Domination can be challenging to the sub without the ugly, mean, demeaning behavior. I keep hearing how subs want that, but I don't get it. Challenge me but cherish me or I am outa there. However, I'm sure many will find the apeal......
You are a good writer from a technical aspect. I will look forward to future writings from you.