All Comments on 'Natalie - The Body Builder Ch. 04'

5/5 for a great story and your writing is improving

Excellent BDSM portrayals. I would pay for a Mistress like her. The choking scene got me off.

I came so hard reading this. You eloquently present some kink lifestyle things that are not easily discussed. Thank you

Standing ovation and erection!

I wasn't sure if this should go into the BDSM or Group section because both elements are strong in the story. Thank you for the feedback and reading my story.

This might be one of my favorite series. The BDSM value is off the charts. I will point out this story is stronger in the BDSM themes and should be moved there.

Great story, super hot. You write very well. Looking forward to reading more from you.

I pumped my banana so hard when you added the choking part. Best chapter so far.

Odd start but a very satisfying ending. 5*

Dynamite! I'm bashing the bishop as I write this. Cheers mate.

My favorite part of the story was the choking. Excellent descriptions of the women involved and action scenes. Hot sex with strong women, whatever else could you ask for.

Two words describe the story, fucking hot! Well written. I felt like I was there with you in some pov type experience. The detail you explain the different bdsm areas help a lot. Good show.

2 thumbs up, 5 out of 5.

I get bored of the same old same old. The story was refreshingly not expected. Creative and sexy.

Chuck Quebec, CA