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just another cheating spouse, i hope she gets caught

So quick and no real meaningful detail. She meets a guy pumping gas for two seconds and agrees to have sex in a car. The dialog was very poor and not realistic. It could have been the usual husband working too hard so bored wife has an affair but this even missed that mark.

OK, the husband was made into a cuckold, but she needed some attention. All would be better if hubby stays in the dark about it.

How do you have a "Prequel" for something that hasn't been posted yet?

At the point that just because she’s pretty, her husband was supposed to pump gas into her car, you lost me. There’s a cheater, and there’s self-absorbed, entitled cheater. This one’s the later and I would think women would be insulted by her.

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You know, it may not be “just another cheating story”. The title says “prequel”. For all we know, “Max” could actually be her husband & maybe he realized how distant he had become & this could be a game they used to play. At this point in the story, anything is possible.

So women can't pump their own gas? So much for the entire feminist movement.

And this guy propositions her out of the blue, without any lead in. Just. Jump in back of my car and let me "do you"?

And her response is not "how dare you? You creepy pervert!" Nor "I am married!"

Just: "Uhhhh," she said. "I'm not sure about that. I don't want to be late for work."

Seriously?

Are you old enough to be on this website?

Well I sure won't be reading more of this. Did you mean prologue instead of prequel? Self entitled princess, can't pump her own gas?

Maybe increase the length of each chapter. No more than two or three chapters to get it all concluded.

Thanks for sharing it.

I've seen nothing in your stories here that makes me want to seek out your other stories.

This little bit of nonsense about a ridiculous cheating wife doesn't really leave an urge to read more.

Why not just call it chapter 1 if it is to be a series