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chytownchytownover 4 years ago
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Thanks for the read.

kalodinkalodinalmost 4 years ago
Coitus Interruptus

A reluctant five for metaphoric originality. This is my second read in your ouvre . Both lack a denoument. And both need such resolution. Are you doing that intentionally?

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