All Comments on 'New Year's Morning'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
You try to write a story

But you're an idiot who tells me what I'm doing. You fail and get 1*

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
I have needy eyes?

I am in bed with you? WTF?

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
By putting the reader in the place of your partner you run the risk of alienating 1/2 your audience

Plus it's an empty story with no conclusion or cliffhanger, even parts and chapters need an end point.

Rw43Rw43over 5 years ago
At long last! Some refreshing Anonnys!

First three Anonny comments: hilarious, awesome and true.

Might we be seeing a better breed of Anonny in 2019?

Oh, the story? Well, I am in the 50% readership with a dick, so that part is ok with me, but I don't know you, so your beautiful and expressive mouth--we are still fantasizing, right?--would never do to my dick what you said it did.

A nice artistic approach to sexual fantasy. Fairly narrow niche, but if that's what you like, keep it up.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Well that was unfinished drivel.

She gets up to make breakfast, he goes into the bathroom and jacks off. Done and done. This was a waste of time.

tazz317tazz317over 5 years ago
PERSONS THAT GET UP EARLY ON NEW YEARS DAY

must not have partied to hardy the night before, TK U MLJ LV NV

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Seriously

Did you even read the content description before posting this in Loving Wives

Wrong category 1*

26thNC26thNCalmost 5 years ago
Why

Why is this even a.story?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

The next time she wants it she can fuck herself what a bitch.

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