All Comments on 'Nice Guys Finish Last Ch. 09'

I hope you enjoyed this chapter. Currently, as of August 19, 2023, I'm working on chapter 18 on my Patreon. I'm thinking this story will have about 25 chapters total but I'm not completely sure yet.

Thank you for reading!

Im so happy another chapter was posted !

This is a lovely story. Thank you.

Great story, love it

I love this story. It is really nice and I hope for their romance to develop slowly. Thank you!

Anonymouslover: You're welcome! 🤗 Thank you for reading!

Karotte: Their romance is definitely developing

Hope to read the next chapter soon

Wow, this story actually has vibes. Most don't. Good work.

this i so life like and possible, i love it, and i too am waiting forthe next installment.

Damn. Hottest story on the site!

Is this a romance? Enjoying it but I have concerns

Soo curious as to what happens next. Cant wait for the update

really would like to know how Julia and "the pervert" end up.

I’d like to hear from Julia why she’s bullying the MC. There’s a lack of perspective in this story. If she’s that beautiful why she doesn’t have a boyfriend.

Feels like there are a lot of things yet to be revealed. I'd love to see you continue this story!

Still a good premise.

Could have used more of his thoughts on seeing all the girl swimmers.

Could have used more descriptions of how Julia masturbated. With dialog between them while she was doing it.

You wrote: "...there I was, staring at her body, as I allowed these indecent thoughts to cross my mind." Could have used some details of what those indecent thoughts were.

I still don't understand how Julia, with BIG BREASTS, would be a swimmer. All top female swimmers are small breasted. Much less drag going through the water.

Four stars.

Because tech suits squish everything in.