All Comments on 'Night Out in the Local'

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WilloWisp777WilloWisp777over 1 year ago

Not a bad start....

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Good start.

chytownchytownover 1 year ago

***Thanks for the read.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Good for first story. But a few typos... Please proof read or get an editor. Keep at it.

anewuseranewuserover 1 year ago

Really nice story. Well written, builds up to a climax. It is great to get the female perspective on sexual fantasy's tension and release. Thank you

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Married mum of Two on here to share stories and fantasies