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by lilguy

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
needs a lot more work

The concept of the story is quite good, but grammar and spelling leaves a lot to be desired. Proof read again and again, may have some one else proof read and edit the story the next time.

Good luck with future endeavors

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