All Comments on 'No Pants in the House'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I liked it. I think the two of them becoming a couple was way to quick, it should at least went to a page two or three or maybe even a second chapter. Just slow your stories down some you write in order to get to the point so maybe slow it down so your readers can walk the fantasy with you. Thank you for sharing.

Pappasleaze!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

That, was stupid.

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

bullying your kid sounds good they come from pathetic parents anyway

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