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Click hereNora smiled and nuzzled Caitlin's cheek as they headed to her bedroom and closed the door behind them.
To be continued...
- COMMENTS
AlexGuntherover 3 years agoAuthorThanks for your comment. I stated how Caitlin, Iris, Nora, Alex, Eliza, Naomi, Naomi, Kara, Alura and Willow look like in the next chapter. The rest of the girls will be mentioned in the 9th chapter, since the previous chapter follow only Nora, Naomi, and Willow. For the other girls, anyone can give me ideas on how they look. Thanks
Alex
FutaLover79over 3 years agoI’m rating this four stars as it’s quite an improvement over some of your more recent output. It still feels like parts of this chapter were written at different times and then placed together later as some plot points seem to be dropped and characters got glossed over. I want more descriptions of what these characters look like, what their cocks look like, maybe develop some personalities with a few of them, etc. I think this was the first time that Iris was described as being black, for instance. I also am still struggling with the fact that Nora and her friends are supposedly 30 years old but still go to school, act like teens, and are treated as such by their mothers. The whole ‘hair tousling’ thing needs to go.
I wanted to see more from the new group from the future that was introduced and then kinda just dropped as well as more from the two sisters in the tube at the school. Maybe next time we can see more of the girl’s school life with lots of group sex with their teachers? I also was a bit disappointed in the after dinner orgy. I wanted you to place more of a focus on the orgy action as opposed to focusing on characters being led away from the orgy and coming back to it later.
Anyways, this was a step up for you in the quality department despite the issues I had with it. Looking forward to the next chapter and don’t forget to tag this with the ‘futa’ and ‘futanari’ tags!
