Nora's Big Mistake Ch. 17

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Stryker and Erin watched as the clones went through training simulations. They were identical copies of Erin, albeit modified for growth acceleration and docility. All of the training programs that the clones went through were designed with input from Erin. Despite providing the genetic template for and overseeing the training of the clones, Erin felt no particular pride in them and viewed them as the Stryker's achievement. By tampering with Erin's genetic samples, Stryker ensured that Erin's clones aged twice as fast while possessing less independence than their donor. Aside from these modifications to their genetic structure, the clones were otherwise physically identical to Erin. The first battalions consisted of four thousand units; in time Erin's clones numbered in the millions.

Back in the forest room...

Nora, her friends and future daughters were each now fully aroused and wet with excitement and pleasure. They wanted to get down on each other, but they each had a dominant and submissive partner in their relationships.

The first group was Willow and Loriane. Willow smiled as she crawled over to Loriane. The young Kryptonian then proceeded to suck on Loriane's cock. Loriane moaned as she felt Willow's lips wrap around her cock. "You're such a good little cocksucker," Loriane said. "I love you."

The girls enjoyed their time together.

To be continued...

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FutaLover79FutaLover79about 3 years ago

I have no idea what to think after reading this. It seems to me that you really have no vision or focus for this story and are just throwing in whatever idea that springs to mind. I honestly have a headache after reading this. The constant jumps between time periods, the additions of Transformers, Power Rangers, Marvel, Animorphs, or whatever the heck is in here is just too much. You’re still jumping away from the sex as well, starting a scene and then steering the story to another place right when the action is about to happen. It’s annoying. When you have characters start to undress or start to play with one another, please stick with that scene until completion. I also noticed that you still seem to think that these characters (Nora’s and Naomi’s parents at least) aren’t familiar with fucking one another when they’ve all had a handful of orgies together in the past. Very odd. I don’t know what else to say except this story is in severe need of some focus. It’s hard to read and there quite simply isn’t enough sex with you constantly stopping things before they get interesting.

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