All Comments on 'Not What It Seems Ch. 04'

That was a chapter of 5 Star sexual entertainment and the fun of seeing her slide down the path of becoming Robbies cocksleeve and baby making fuck toy. Sweet fun and great sexual exploitation. Who does not enjoy watching a good girl become the cock holster for a strong alpha male. Rock it on and keep writing this adventure. Thanks for you time to publish this. Cheers

Such a stupid slut

Throughly unlikeable people.

honestly, kind of disappointed. Don't really like where the plot is going but it's your story and your decision. I'll probably drop this series but best of luck with it.

To the anonymous who mentioned probably dropping the series: Thank you for taking the time to comment, I always appreciate hearing from you guys even in moments like this. Even though you're disappointed now, thanks to you piping up, I have a better idea of what kind of stuff to post in the future :) And I hope I'll see you again, whether it's this series or another.

Not loving what's happening to Jeremy but I still want to read more of where you want to take this story ✨

But in my mind Robbie has already left her alone,

with their lots of kids and no support since he never married her, to be with another slut and Jeremy is already happy with a woman who cuckolds him only physically and who would never mistake sexual gratification for love.

It's funny you would say "Robbie already left her alone", because someone on AO3 actually said the other day --- i fully expect him to break her heart just for the fun of it, and not even out of vengeance on her or jeremy. --- I love how you both see him, because as I was explaining to them, I really didn't want there to be any chance whatsoever for anyone to get attached to him, and I'm so happy it seems to have worked.

Though I don't normally -plan- to write another chapter or part for a story/series, I actually am in the starting process of another for this one, and I plan for that chapter to be the end. Whether or not a spin off will happen at some point, I dunno what my muse might come up with, but the next addition to this will be the finale. I just really hope people come back to check it out after this chapter 😅

I know I pissed off some people, this chapter's got a poor rating to show it lol but it is understandable. I'm irritated this is the way my muse took things, but I've had a lot of fun writing this. The mixed interactions I've had both on here and AO3 have been the best part to be honest, so I'm definitely looking forward to seeing the reactions to what's about to happen.

And thank you specifically, for taking the time to be one of those interactions 🙂

I don't know how long this will take, because I'm putting some extra special work in as a thank you/apology to everyone, but there is officially something in the works.

I love how Robert doesn't take it easy on her just because she's pregnant and keeps her sore. I know you said the next installment would be the finale, but I'd love to see Robert live out his fantasy and impregnate her as soon as she comes home from the hospital. This is top-notch stuff for people who enjoy a breeding kink.

It's amusing to me how many readers between AO3 and Lit keep wanting to see some Irish twins happen. It's hot to me too, but for two different sites to have the same reactions is amusing. That being said, I am so glad you're enjoying it 🙂 and thank you for taking the time to let me know.

Val has finally broken, yeahhh !!!😁 Definitely hoping for more ❤️

Sp far it's exactly as it seems.

lol guys DON'T GET MARRIED, THIS author here has given you all useful insight just how BIG OF A PIG WOMEN ARE. ..... yes this means your wife too (oh sure she might be honest and faithful for a couple of years, but bank on her letting someone at her work fill her taco with their special sauce

Your wife or wife to be is most likely a dirtball piece of trash and a master manipulator