All Comments on 'Now Spread Your Legs Ch. 02'

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ValensGirlValensGirlover 11 years ago

I really enjoyed the sense that she's in control, and the parts with her fucking him. Yum.

I think the stories might flow a little better if you use fewer short, choppy sentences, though. I think it works great when you're describing him jerking his cock, but not so much when you're describing the flowing, luscious curves of a woman.

But making him stay hard for her will never not be hot...

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