All Comments on 'Nude Beach and a Nude... Mall? Pt. 05'

Interesting concept. A little too much sexual activity and not enough emphasis on public nudity for my taste.

@AnonInterestingConcept

Well that's the thing with these stories - people are either outright fucking or at the very least doing something titillating. There's not a whole lot you can do if everyone is nonchalantly engaging in public nudity in a non-sexual manner. Having a "normal" person enter the mall and getting embarrassed is a pretty good twist.

Really great story! I only wish there was more, have you considered opening up the setting to include less-traditional areas as the mall becomes a big attraction? You could do theme parks, water parks, times square, airports, you name it and if it's written half as well as this it'd turn out great!