All Comments on 'Nymphomaniac Chapter'

deep

Wow. I loved this.

Great, 5 stars. Can't wait to read more.

Liked what you were doing in your first nymphomaniac piece — the anonymity, the equivocal/helpless feeling all played out with such erotic intensity and the closing line of resignation. This piece is less erotic in part because of the nature of the sex but also flowed less smoothly, less intensity and now we know her name (preferred anonymity). And Judy has resigned herself to her fate. Shes moved beyond the regret/guilt attached to nymphomania. Your work is erotically creative and psychologically charged — like it. Would have enjoyed a deeper/ongoing exploration of the theme possibly without the BDSM/nonconsent aspect that characterized your MC here. Just a thought.