All Comments on 'Of Daughters And Mates Ch. 08'

Wonderful read. The dynamics are great fun. Not a fan of hybrids, though the transformation including sex is a cool idea. (Hybrids are like taking a tank and installing a second main gun. It doesn't make sense, there is no wasted space for the internals)

As I do hope for Anna to get knocked up too, I struggle to see how transformation will work, though i could see the body blocking that power, which could introduce a sense of powerlessness on her part and our alpha being appropriately protective. Maybe her Sunny would even try to fight for that reason, while Anna is willing, giving us some call backs to the first fight at the dinner table.

Anyway. Would love for you to keep it up.

This story is the reason I keep coming back to check this site <3

This is an interesting story. I hope that it is continued with maybe a cross country pursuit and a cathartically realistic and satisfying ending but not too soon cause it has read me all summer potential. PLEASE WRITE MORE CHAPTERS

I can't wait for more from this story!

Are you going to keep updating this story? I love it.