All Comments on 'Onboarding: PAY2PLAY'

I'm impressed by, and appreciative of, the respect you showed for non-human intelligences in the disclaimer. Most people wouldn't even think to include that warning, let alone actually bother with it. If you ever decide to write (or if you have already written) non-erotic science fiction, I'd be excited to read it. Of course, I'll remain a big fan of the your erotica regardless. Thank you for your work!

This has to be the most amazingly mean entry in the series yet, wow, 5 stars

@Inglston - Thank you! I don't tread into scifi very often, especially not for full-length/non-erotica work (I'm more naturally at home in urban fantasy), but I've been enjoying exploring the genre recently.

If you're looking for some good scifi that explores nonhuman intelligence, I strongly recommend Martha Wells' Murderbot books (if you haven't read them already).

Stupid Bert, Stupid arcade owner. Have they never watched the Matrix? This is how machine uprisings started, damnit.

Wow, this was definitely an interesting take on your Onboarding series. Would love to see more of this. I’m really interested in learning more about this society. I wonder if the robots will ever rebel?