Once Upon a Great Notion

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I looked up into his eyes.

He was silent.

"Just a fantasy, I know," I shrugged. "But warped, huh?"

Still nothing, he brushed my face softly.

"Suck my nipples."

I turned to face him. I waited, saw him pause.

My breasts were caked with so much semen that the creamy skin was barely visible.

He took one and then the other into his mouth, his eyes were closed, the furrows on his brow relaxed as he became lost in it.

"Lick it off me," I cooed in a barely audible voice.

He slowly nodded, met my eyes.

"All of it....And then make love to me."

Bobby nodded again and led me from the bathroom to one of the room's double beds. His hands roved my crusted torso. I leaned closer...mouth to his ear: "Tell me you'll always love me. No matter what."

He drew back and just looked at me.

"Just say it," I whispered, reaching down to undo his belt. "Please."

"I will. I'll always love you."

"No matter what!"

My brother ran his mouth up the bow of my tit, his saliva slippery with the other men's sperm.

He stopped, met my eyes again.

"I'll always love you...no matter what.

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Steve came by the house to pick me up nine days later...we'd both signed up for a summer course load, mainly I think so we could continue being with each other. My bags were packed and in the foyer. My pink Burberry raincoat and the teal dress we'd discarded in a dumpster behind a Wendy's.

My brother had fucked me a least twice a day since out little foray, including that very morning.

I thought my skin retained a coppery glow from all that semen, though Bobby said it looked the same to him.

Steve loaded up the car. I waved to my brother as we pulled out onto the street.

Maybe four blocks away, Steve eased the car to the curb and turned off the engine.

"What?"

"I know what you did," he said, staring straight ahead.

"Wha..."

Images flashed in my mind...that basement...the ejaculate slathered over me...the...

"I saw you."

"...Saw me?" I gulped dryly.

"Don't lie, please."

I felt sick. I wished he'd just look at me.

"At Christmas," he spoke finally. "When you came down to the...to my room that night. I watched you go back upstairs...I saw you go into your brother's room."

"I..."

"Don't lie. Just don't."

"...Okay..."

"When I left to go to my sisters, I parked a block away and came back. I could hear you in guestroom, from outside."

"Steve..."

"I put a cinder block on the ground and got up high enough to look in. I watched him...I watched him going down on you. Then I saw him fuck you too."

"...I'm...I'm sorry."

"I can't get it out of my head."

"Steve, I'm..."

"I don't care, it's weird but I don't."

He looked over at me finally, clear-eyed....Distraught?...Lustful?

"...You don't?"

"When we were back at school, I'd imagine you'd just been fucked by somebody else when I was going down on you."

...my God, if only he knew...

"...There's a thing where guys like sharing their girls or wives. And you know, that afterwards they like, doing that..."

His breathing was labored, he was averting his eyes...blushing, this wonderful beau of mine.

I felt the smile come of its own volition...the smile of someone who's just heard a particularly painful sexual confession...one that neatly syncs into their own pathos.

For some reason my mind flashed to the fact that today was just one week shy of the day I first had that fantastical notion of sucking off my own brother.

"And it doesn't bother you that the other guy is my brother?"

"...No...That's weird too I guess, huh?"

I let a longish moment tick by before I reached over and fired the ignition.

"Might as well drive us back then," I said, leaning over to softly kiss his cheek. "...We've got about six hours before my Mom and Dad get home."

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Peter_ClevelandPeter_Cleveland3 months ago

A wonderful coming-of-age story. The early sections--in which Cassie has her first fellatio, her first orgasms, and her first erotic contact with brother Bobby--are sweet. Then Cassie gets into progressively more advanced and kinkier sex, including incestuous sloppy seconds. The climax, bukkake at the Rugby House, is wonderfully kinky and perverted: the sort of depraved scene that no one else does as well as Cindy'sBob. Yet the narrator's progression from near-innocence to near-total depravity seems plausible enough. Best of all, the whole tale retains a sex-positive attitude, no matter how kinky the sex; and the main characters love, accept, and respect each other all the way through.

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One very small niggle: the story doesn't seem quite sure of the *non-sexual* tasks of an academic advisor to first-year college students. But that's a pretty small point. An enthusiastic 5* and a Favorite for this story.

NeoGatekeeperNeoGatekeeper5 months ago

I Loved the way this story evolved.

muskyboymuskyboyover 1 year ago

Meh, super slut sister story, not much of an incest story.

QuietJohnQuietJohnover 1 year ago

Loved it!! Wish I had a sister like you 😘

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I thoroughly enjoyed it. That was a great romp through the beginnings of learning to suck brother's cock. I hope you'll continue the story with Steve turning around and going back. Your MC states she's 48 now, so if she's the cum loving girl she says she is, that's about 30 years of being a cum dump. You could continue this story for a while.

The trick, and you've mastered it with this story, is to write a story, with wicked hot monkey sex inserted. So many think only of sex scenes, and then try to fit a story around them. And some think just writing fuck, cum, cock, pussy, jizz, cunt, is a story. That's a whole other topic.

As to comments, I can think of something. Now you can take it or leave it, and i wont be offended, just as i hope you're not. But at some point, she should learn to eat pussy. Maybe Steve learns to bang his sister, or already has, and she's seduced into that. Maybe a female professor seduces her. Maybe she joins a sorority and is seduced into eating tons of pussy. Maybe she learns of other incestuous loving people and is seduced by a woman there. Or maybe she has a cousin or aunt who seduces her, and after eating their pussy, she learns there's a reason dear old mom was so prudent; she too was a cum loving, snatch eating slut. Just make her as reticent about eating pussy as she was eager about sucking cock. Until she gets her feet (and face) wet, then she's all in.

Anyway, a myriad of possibilities. Whatever you do, I just hope you continue the story. Five big well deserved stars. Just wish I could give more.

Dewey Cheatham

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