by csdsapper
Great Story. Only thing, don't forget to use quotation marks when anyone is speaking, or it can get a little confusing. I'm looking forward to reading more from you! Keep up the good work!
I'm simply reiterating what "Smuttyandfun" stated. Please use quotation marks for speech. It makes it so much easier to read. Cheers.
Hot story! Love the dommy wife! I definitely want to encourage you to continue their story!
Great story! Don't sweat the details. You learn by doing and the hardest part is getting the words on paper.
Very Hot....!!....Puts the reader, me, on the very edge of wanting to be there....
uncanny, I was fantasising a very similar scenario on my drive back from work today, came home and read this! Loved it!
And yes, I also would like to hear part 2 where they enact it...or maybe next step would be pegging and then enact for real...mmmmmmm
My wife asked me to suck her lovers cock and there was no turning back I am a cock sucker.