by Lucky_lover
This is really well done. You are capturing all of the emotions and excitement in an intelligent and believable manner. A loving mature couple gradually overcoming wife's reluctance to take a lover. Can't wait to read what comes next!
I like the stories so far and all the building toward is perfect. Can't wait to read more :)
If LW had an award for Most Inane Dialogue, this story would take it by acclimation, no less. Dumbest stuff I've ever read, except for some of the macho BTB crap. Idiotic.
'''''''Our Perfect Marriage Ch. 03
Maria choses a lover.'''''''' ?? Choses is not a word. Should have been CHOOSES or just plain chose.
All good so far. Let's hope she falls in love with his big cock and her husband gets one of the ultimate cuckolding experiences -his wife leaving him for a bigger and better man!
Advice on how to act to all potential voluntary cuckolds - as soon as you feel that the thought of your wife in bed with another man excites you - immediately take a knife in one hand, pull your testicles with the other hand and cut them off with a sharp but confident movement and throw them as far as possible. Because you don't need these useless meat balls anymore...
Don’t listen to the Haters. They are diseased. They avidly read every word of your story, then whine about it. *smh*
This chapter was excellent, your best by far. The communication between Hubby and Maria was much more on point, and you’ve left (some of) craving for more of Maria and Will getting together and becoming deeply intimate. Keep it up, and I look forward to the next chapter.
Oh yeah… 5/5 stars.