All Comments on 'Our Second Afternoon Together'

by quietdreamer3

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Yikes

Jack off alot?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Good Read

Loved the dialogue, it was very real. Would be nice to have more background on the characters. Where's the first time? Good luck with your fantasy...hope to see the third time.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Loved it

Easy reading. Felt comfortable. Would love to be the third person.

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