All Comments on 'Out of the Night: Escape'

I was absolutely loving this story, until the punishment came into it. I love everything else about it, but the whips and stuff are just not for me.

I hope you continue this story. It’s so good

I’ve given up on this story around page 3. Can’t wrap my mind around a woman surrendering her mind to such insane contemptuous behavior. No one with any self respect would behave like that.

Great sequel! Hope this isn’t the end

So much insecurity in May, it hurts.

I very much enjoyed this and the first story, I liked the evolution into a loving, spiritually powerful D/s relationship. May wanted to be punished, she wanted Damien to own her completely, and in doing so he was ready to shield her from all other pain and give his life for her. Maybe it’s not what you were going for but that’s what I took from this, the true nature of a real D/s relationship.