All Comments on 'Out West Ch. 15: Martha's Dream'

There is a lifetime in this dream.

Hope and despair, loss and new love ...

And in the end a new beginning.

Stay with us, Martha. May you be the mother to every woman in the story, and may every woman in the story be your lover too.

You've outdone yourself with this chapter, Pixie. Throat-gripping drama aplenty and there's not a lot I can say except congratulations. Whatever you write next when Out West finishes, you'll have to work hard to match it. More than five stars were it possible.

I am so glad that you enjoyed this, darling Maonaigh - the final chapter is up tomorrow and I hope will provide a fitting finale - Mama Serrada's contribution was vast xxxxxx

Thank you darling Amadeus, I was hoping to capture that sense without wearying the reader. Martha has one last outing, and the finale is up tomorrow xxxxx

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Damn back shooters. I have high hopes that Martha will pull through only a bit worse for wear thanks to "Doc Adams"( nice touch). The unfortunate event of Martha being shot does provide the perfect opportunity for the legend of Jack Anders to be put to rest. A fake funeral and Martha's return to her female persona would solve quite a few problems. Martha has earned a well deserved break from the bloody trials and tribulations of her eventful life, and she should be allowed to enjoy the loving ministrations of her favorite girls for as long as fate allows. A reward for a life well lived, and a job well done.

... and very well done. I appreciate knowing more details about Martha's backstory, and I do hope she will be able to recover as fully as possible. Also, I'm very happy for Emma & Tim.

Thank you so much OneAuthor … I hope the denouement will not disappoint xxxxx

Still with this bad headache i have, wonderfully chapter

I hope the headache improves- and so glad to have your comments on the series xxxxx