by sharonpalmetto
Great chapter. Please take Bessie further. She's got a lot to learn and experience yet.
Can't wait until you go back tho the original, unfinished and undeveloped story. Thanks
Jesus it is amazing ohhhhhhh really greatttt
I hope those two women are ugly and old lol
So thank you for writing this great work!!!
God blesss u!!!!!!!!
Great story. Well written. Please keep it up and give us more of Bessie's spiral down.
Write as you wish. This is very good and has the potential to go further and deeper.