All Comments on 'Paradise Isle, Perfect Wife Pt. 05'

This one was boring, nothing happened. Seems like filler until you can think of stuff to write.

Are Kitty & Sebastian from an existing story of their own? I love that she’s actually happy as his slave girl.

So many of the main characters in these stories are tricked or uncertain I loved meeting someone in a happy relationship for once.

I liked the reminder of all the crazy stuff done at the resort. She isn't thinking nearly enough about the consequences of her decisions on the island. Back home the real wor!d is a dangerous place where her decisions could translate to bad things happening to her and because of the rules, she can't change certain things.

Loved the extended worldbuilding during the chapter middle and also the changing relationship dynamic. Will be interesting how big she will go in the end to further empower herself.

I also chime in the "like the world building" chorus, trying not to hold the breath while waiting for the next chapter.