All Comments on 'Part 9, A New Beginning'

by Suntandcupl

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Buster2UBuster2U6 months ago

Hot Hot Hot, but I was waiting for the other shoe to drop. For Chris to say or do something that Lucy shouldn't agree to, but agrees due to her lust. Oh Something like fucking every day by themselves or running off for a weekend together by themselves. Or something like that. Something that would cause Hubby to pound the crap out of Chris. It is so easy when sharing your woman for the other guy to get 'carried away' and disrespect you and call you a 'cuck' or something like that. For a guy like me, It is hard not to pound the shit out of him at that time. But in reality, that is probably what really should be done anyway. 10 stars for a good job. Buater2U

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Would be hard to find two stupider more selfish people walking around on the planet. No worries though, the STD's are just around the corner for these two morons and that will be that!

LenardSpencerLenardSpencer6 months ago

Hi, Suntandcupl. Please put the Number of the Chapter in the Title. Looking at the body of work, it is impossible to list them going by the titles. Only by the posting dates can it be done. An enjoyable tale but Michael is so vague and lenient with his "instructions" it is no wonder that his slut wife thinks she can do whatever she wants. Cheers.

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

I didn't read this story. I simply skipped to the end to thank you for the heads-up that it was a story about a cheating skank whore. In case you're wondering, that's what you call a wife who has sex with single men.

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Negative 10 stars. That was a good job? Yikes!

SuntandcuplSuntandcupl6 months agoAuthor

There are a lot of people named anonymous that are literary critics.

26thNC26thNC5 months ago

Cuck crap piled high.

katibkatib5 months ago

No tension; no drama; lots of description and poor grammar.

MorbidromanticMorbidromantic5 months ago

I appreciate the author's initial warning. I hate stories about swinging, sharing and sharing. As I haven't read it, I haven't rated it.

Rocky62Rocky624 months ago

For heavens sake, pull out yer dick and spitroast the slut

AmbulAmbulabout 2 months ago

Very hot sex scenes. Mike will have to keep his insatiable slut wife on a tighter leash; I see her beginning to push the limits again. Pretty soon she will be fucking the fence post behind his back. It is much better when Mike controls the where and where of the action and lets his wife have her fun without worrying about the logistics or the boundaries. Fabulous series. I, like other readers, wished the author would number his chapters. It is a pain to look at the dates to figure out the order. I love the characters the author has developed; Mike especially is very appealing and their dynamic comes across as very real. Love it

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