All Comments on 'Passion of the Rapper'

Make her slowly give herself to him until he completely changes her into his filthy black cock slave bitch. Make her get piercings and tattoos. Train her to serve bbc like she used to serve the church. Keep the slut on a leash with a dog collar and turn her out in a black church. A devoted servant to the black community.

Please Don't Make This Storyline About Another Pass Around White Chick.

Those Stories Are Boring As Fuck. You Got Good Story So Far. Keep Going.

Spelling and grammar aside the voluptuous redhead seems to be an ongoing theme.

Switch up some of your character descriptions.

Do not fuck up the story by bringing in the thug buddies or taking her to the hood

Nothing wrong with having similar characters especially redheads ;) also a helpful tip use size references for description. example: "her buns were each the size of a basketball." could use some work but good stuff here