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by Prefertosmile
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Anonymousover 3 years agoGreat job but where's the rest?
All that buildup and then an anticlimax? How did they feel about it after? Was this just one affair among many? Had either lied? The writing was pretty solid but the sex felt rushed and then kills off everything.
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Prefertosmile@PrefertosmileI write stories based on memories, fantasies and a mix of the two. All feedback welcome.
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