All Comments on 'Paul, John, Linda & Carol Pt. 03'

Wasting my time with this dumb story - or whatever you call this bullshit. Think twice before adding another chapter, please!

Thank you for submitting, but the writing is truly deplorable. I do not care about the content, but author should review stories written by the higher-ranking authors to understand how to develop something that would keep readers reading.

Well... We are waiting

Stop with the role play! It ads to an already confusing plot and distracts us from the story.

Wow, that was really bad writing.

wtf?

Writing half a dozen paragraphs, does not a chapter make!

How stupid is this sissy wimp husband? She's been fucking around on him forever, She's an evil skank slut, kick her whore ass to the curb and man up! Beyond stupid!

You've written a story containing 3800 words, that's a single Lit page, maybe a bit more, but spread it over three chapters and three categories? Should have been one submission, and pick a category and stick to it.

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Also, you KNEW the story wasn't finished, since you titled it Part 1, yet posted after only 1,000 words. If you've written 1,000 words, and you know the stories not finished, don't post, keep writing.

Poor on every level

Where are Ringo and George? Why not get the whole band together for your cuck story.