All Comments on 'Pavlov's Dog -- 750 Words'

Sadly these are just getting worst. Your stories were good, but the last few have just been bad. Not sure what changed. Maybe someone hacked your account and they are posting really poor stories. Cheers

Ugh

Hopefully, the gun will still be smoking when he puts it down.

Just mention cuck stuff in your forward and you'll get less 1* review from springing it on them...like this one.

AZslyder : the title said it is worse than normal cuck

AZslyder : The title itself was screaming Pavlov's Dog

In case you dont know Pavlov demonstrated salivation in dogs through a series of experiments where he paired the sound of a bell with the presentation of food. Over time, the dogs began to associate the bell with food and would start to salivate at the sound of the bell, even when no food was presented

Given enough abuse even Pavlov's dogs will bite.

Femdom agitprop...

Very original and full of fun.

Beyond stupid. Better ending. Hubby had other plans in mind. Four masked men came and and subdued the cheating skank slut. Dave had sold her to a Mexican cartel that owned several whore houses in Tijuana. Her high and mighty, I know everything and can control my idiot husband world came crashing down. Dave was laughing hard watching her beg and plead not to be taken. He enjoyed seeing the four men use and abuse her for over an hour before they drug her by her hair to the van, dumped her in and drove off. He never saw the stupid whore again and never gave a flying fuck. She had to fuck 10-12 times per day until the STD's got her.

I smiled at this. Utterly implausible but fun.

Checked "Like It", but I didn't. The quality of the writing and the succinctness of the psychological playing out of the Pavlovian theme garner my respect--but my reaction to the plot is overwhelmingly negative, which is all a good writer can ask for, right? You generated authentic repulsion, so kudos on that.

Keep writing.

MLJ

Maybe the fucking dum est thing I've ever read.

Is there a minus 1 million to qualify this (fortunatelly) short crap?

Please, for the love of God, don’t snort meth and coke before writing again.

Ok, I thought mine was insane. I loved it.

Perhaps because of the limited words. I was unable to get into the story. And a bit confused. Were they roleplaying? -------------

The line "I'm not a whore, I'm a slut." -----------

Thought the husband could've fired back with, "A slut is a dumb whore who gains no financial reward."------

Anyways for what it is I gave it 5☆.

10 Big Blazing Stars for a really Hot Story. I loved the theme of training your husband to accept your going out for some strange but always coming home to reward your loving hubby afterwards. I really liked that plot1 Buster2U

Crap. I do not see any man succumbing to this pavlovian experiment.

Good stuff.

Disrespect for the male human race, and total disdain for marriege.

Shame he should have gone after the asshole than divorced her. The disrespect for him speaks volumes.

Yeah.... This was.... This was.... This was not good.... 1/5 BRB

It was so poignant that it made me run emotions from A all the way to B... No, that's stretching it. I stopped at A.

Somebody needs to train that poor lapdog how to load and fire that weapon

I have always loved sloppy seconds. Since the wife has to fuck someone else to get her pussy sloppy, then I like that too. So, this was a fun story for me. Thanks, Buster2U

Not for me. Too disrespectful and manipulating.

Obviously she had no love or respect for her husband. A total waste of a woman.

I have too much pain for the husband and too much hate for the "wife"? that I couldn't enjoy it.

WTF?

I'm assuming B2U is a troll at this point. He's just too much of a degenerate not to be. Not that there aren't much worse sorts out there, but this guy...he's either a troll or really messed up. Or both.

No, cheating is NOT keeping secrets.

Cheating is when you cheat, not doing something by the rules like you're supposed to.

In the marriage sense, meaning to break your vow of fidelity.

Five stars even though I hate guns, ~~JB Edwards

What a stupid, stupid woman.

Doesn't she realize that damage accumulates over time?

Sooner or later, her magic pussy is going to lose its power over him.

All she's training him to do is hate her

And when that switchover happens, her life will change radically.

That's assuming she survives.

The only thing keeping her alive is his love for her.

When that finally dies, so will she.

Dire.

You write stupid stories. Going to stop reading your publications.

***Thanks for the read.

Risky business, girl!

Pushed too far, emotional short-circuits occur, and Pavlov's dog bites!

Three stars, could have been two.

JPB

Rypical female thinking