All Comments on 'Paying it Forward Ch. 03'

Read all three parts today and they’re great! Another reason to love San Jose. Looking forward to more…

Such a hot and horny story.

OMG. This was SO hot and beautifully crafted. I am horny as hell! You have used words to create the passion and the ecstasy of a sublime connection of two men, two bodies, two sexual spirits who are meant to serve one another! Can't wait for the next chapter!

Hot Hot Hot

read all 3 parts came 2 times great story

This is one of the best stories I’ve ever read.

I like the line lost in Leo very much. Your dialog did have a few hiccups. I would suggest reading it aloud to yourself just to make sure it makes sense. Great story.