All Comments on 'Paying it Forward Ch. 03'

I like the line lost in Leo very much. Your dialog did have a few hiccups. I would suggest reading it aloud to yourself just to make sure it makes sense. Great story.

This is one of the best stories I’ve ever read.

Hot Hot Hot

read all 3 parts came 2 times great story

OMG. This was SO hot and beautifully crafted. I am horny as hell! You have used words to create the passion and the ecstasy of a sublime connection of two men, two bodies, two sexual spirits who are meant to serve one another! Can't wait for the next chapter!

Such a hot and horny story.

Read all three parts today and they’re great! Another reason to love San Jose. Looking forward to more…